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Here Is my reflection for the activity. Thank you both for helping me out so much and I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors! Going into the border-crossing activity, I had pretty high expectations about what I expected to learn from the activity and I am happy to say that my expectati...

Here is my revised essay: The two films “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And the Spring Comes” both deliver a powerful message to their audiences. “Mona Lisa Smile” deals greatly with women empowerment and rejects the notion that women have a specific “role” that they must follow throughout their life. “And t...

Hey Meini, Thank you for your feedback it was very helpful and I feel that it definitely made my paper better. You are completely correct regarding the grammar mistake in my first paragraph and the lack of evidence in my second paragraph so I fixed those accordingly. Also I apologize if there was co...

Hi, Xuejin, I am sorry for the late response but thank you so much for your comments and suggestions. I followed your advice and separated some of the big paragraphs into smaller ones. I also removed some of the background information that summarizes the movies since we all have seen it. This was a ...

Hi Meini, I enjoyed reading your paper and wanted to give you a little feedback that I think would make it even better. In your first paragraph, I think that it would be nice if you were to mention your three points that your paper is based on here in the introduction. This is just to give the reade...

Hi Xuejin, I really enjoyed reading your essay and wanted to give you a little feedback that I believe would make it even better. I believe that a little more information could be added to the first paragraph. Here you could mention some of the main points of your paper like the metaphors used and t...

Zion Emanuel Depictions of Cultures in “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And the Spring Comes” The two films “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And the Spring Comes” both deliver a powerful message to their audiences. “Mona Lisa Smile” deals greatly with women empowerment and rejects the notion that women have a specific ...