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1. My expectation of this assignment was to be able to see these two movies from an eastern perspective, and understand how these two movies are seen in the eastern culture. Growing up in America and having a chance to interact with people from other countries I understand that people can see the sa...

Women’s Rights and the Pursuit of Happiness Mona Lisa Smile, and And The Spring Comes are two movies that try to depict what life was like from a women’s perspective in twentieth century America, and China. Mona Lisa Smile takes place in America when women were expected to be “stay at home moms.” Wo...

Zhen I think it may be cultural thing. I remember when I was in middle school as well there was a big emphasis on structure as well. However, the deeper I got into my academic career I realized when you write its not enough to just focus on structure it is about being able to analyze and come to a c...

Zhen I am sorry for the late reply but just wanted to say one last thing. In your reply you talked about since middle school you learned one particular way you have been learning English. I am not saying this is right or wrong but one thing my professor has been talking to me about and maybe this is...

Zhen Thank you for your feedback. I will restructure my essay when I make my changes so that the paragraphs are less dense, and try to make it more colloquial for the reader. In reference to my logical arguments I try to make my essay sound unbiased, because I try to be as objective as possible so t...

Tong Wu Thank you for the compliments. When I go to make revisions to my essay I will try to be more descriptive and explain more logic more in depth. I think in regards to feminism both movies make a good logical argument as to why these women should have more rights, and why they would pursue thei...

Zhen Sun I am a fan of Shakespeare but I am not really sure if that quote flows with the theme of the paper that well. I understand the difficulty of learning a second language especially when the two languages have extreme differences. I think throughout the paper you tried to be to grandiose, and ...

Tong Wu I first want to start of by saying how impressed I am with with your proficiency in English knowing that it is your second language. I have been studying the Chinese language for 2 years and understand the difficulty of learning a foreign tongue. Now in reference to your paper I think overal...

Matthew Koval Women’s Rights and the Pursuit of Happiness Mona Lisa Smile , and And The Spring Comes are two movies that try to depict what life was like from a women’s perspective in twentieth century America, and China. Mona Lisa Smile takes place in America when women were expected to be “stay at...