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Reflection 1) What were your expectations for the border-crossing activity? Are your expectations met? Why or why not? I did not have any specific expectation for the border-crossing activity. As a result, I was a little nervous to share my thoughts on the movies with the students from China. I thou...

[Revision} Even in the current society, women continue to live in a masculine society. Over the past century, the women around the world struggled to fight for gender equality. The movie “Mona Lisa Smile” depicts the difficulties the women in the United States faced, while the movie “And the Spring ...

Hi Ruby, I really like how you made side notes with parenthesis in your sentences to provide further explanations. This helped me to understand concepts better. I also really like how you tied up your points in the conclusion with a song at the end. If I could give a couple of suggestions, I think y...

Hi Xiaoxue, I really liked the layout of your essay. I liked how it first portrayed the similarities between the two protagonists, then went on to analyze the differences in their circumstances and the films' viewpoints. There were a couple of things that I noticed that could make a diffrence. First...

Hi Yicheng, Thank you for your opinions on how to improve my essay. Now that I looked over my essay again, I do see that I could elaborate more on Katherine, "And the Spring Comes", and my conclusion. While I was trying to focus on my broad ideas, I missed several essential parts to the pl...

Hi Xiaoxue, Thank you for bringing up the point about Wang Cailing and her views on marriage. I do agree with you that she saw herself as superior to the others; therefore, that could be a reason why she turned down Zhou Yu. Perhaps marriage was not the appropriate example that I should have given. ...

David Lee Success and Beauty Even in the current society, women continue to live in a masculine society. Over the past century, the women around the world struggled to fight for gender equality. The movie “Mona Lisa Smile” depicts the difficulties the women in the United States faced, while the movi...