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Reflection: 1) What were your expectations for the border-crossing activity? Are your expectations met? Why or why not? Initially for this border crossing activity, I was not sure what to expect. I thought it was going to be slightly dreadful since it was another assignment. I thought this assignmen...

Cultural Women Struggles (EDITED) The two movies “Mona Lisa Smile” directed by Mike Newell and “And the Spring Comes” directed by Gu Changwei show important American and Chinese cultural aspects respectively. “Mona Lisa Smile,” made 2003, depicts a story that took place in 1950s Massachusetts. The s...

Hi Xiaoxue, you're welcome . Thank you for the movie suggestion, I will defiantly take a look and set if its available for me to watch. (:
If you would like continue communication after this, maybe WeChat ? What do you think?
~ Leah

Dear Ruby,
I think you can expand your analysis , will be interesting to see how you can think a little outside of the box by expanding your analysis regarding your sentence. However it is up to and what you think is best for your paper. You're welcome (:
Good Luck

In this thread I think I might have got confused in the earlier comments and I sincerely apologize to all. -- David, Looking back at your paper in your 4th paragraph, I think you should explain more about how the movie was film. "The director did not glamourize the actress with make up or with ...

Hi Ruby, I saw this sentence: People become great when they have a dream. Although they are sometimes defeated by cruel fate, the hope still carries on to the next generation. I think this is a great point, maybe you can expand your point a little more. It is more obvious with Wang however maybe you...

Ruby, I am so sorry for miss spelling your name, my apologizes. I after reading your paper, I see agree that you should probably stick to your original arrangement, it works for your case. On a side note, I like how you referred to the song and typed you the lyrics. It was a clever move and I think ...

Turning the back the focus onto your essay since this thread is about you, I reread your article. After rereading your article, I liked your analysis on Betty and the "Mona Lisa" painting. Your comparison was brief, I think you should explain that paragraph a little more. Maybe extend the ...

Ruby and Xiaoxue, thank you for your feedback. I appreciate the help with picking up my grammars mistakes as well as additional suggestions to better my essay. I will definitely take in both of your suggestions. They are very helpful :) . I personally struggle with grammar, never has been a strong s...

Xioxue, thank you for suggestions. I will defiantly consider a deeper analysis of the characters that you have suggested.