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Reflection on Border Crossing Activity: This activity has strengthened both my collaboration and writing skills. I feel as though working with other students has revealed a different perspective on how I personally should work with others and how I can adapt to specific writing requirements. With th...

Revised Essay: The films “And the Spring Comes” and “Mona Lisa Smile” reveal the roles women play in society and how their decisions and actions are tested, specifically related to their positions as women educators. The film, “And the Spring Comes,” displays a woman protagonist, Tsailing, who value...

Zhen, Thank you so much for your suggestions. I think you make a great point about my transition words. That is something I would like to include in my revisions. Overall thank you for taking the time to thoroughly look at my essay and make suggestions. Additionally, you made a great point about def...

Dear Zhen, I found that beginning with the ideal "to be or not to be" set a framework for the essay. I think you do a nice job of explaining in the first paragraph how "to be or not to be" ties into whether one chooses to keep going or give up. I feel as though throughout the res...

Tong, I enjoyed your discussion on how the women in both films were "new women." The spirit in each of these women, that you highlight, is very relevant to their breaking barriers from traditional ways. I see this both with Katherine and Ms. Wang when they begin teaching. They are faced wi...

The films “And the Spring Comes” and “Mona Lisa Smile” reveal the roles women play in society and how their decisions and actions are tested, specifically related to their positions as women teachers. “And the Spring Comes” displays a woman protagonist, Tsailing, who values her passions, family, har...