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by Zhen S.
Wed Apr 24, 2019 11:44 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny
Replies: 7
Views: 7761

Re: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny

My thinking of this activity: During this activity, I revised the sentence patterns I used in my composition. I tried to do it after thinking of the meaning in the letters Matt told me about my expression, but I was not sure whether my understanding was what he suggested me. And I also added the par...
by Zhen S.
Wed Apr 24, 2019 8:59 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny
Replies: 7
Views: 7761

Re: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny

My review composition: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny – My Critique of Mona Lisa Smile and And the Spring Comes 180102 孙祯 Zhen Sun To be or not to be, that is the question. When striving to realize your ideal, you may feel you can’t break off the dilemmas which you have begun fighting against...
by Zhen S.
Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:41 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: Women’s Rights and the Pursuit of Happiness
Replies: 8
Views: 9158

Re: Women’s Rights and the Pursuit of Happiness

Matt Thanks for giving me suggestion and your letters in reply. But I found out a point I am interested in. I noticed that both you and Kate pointed out my problems of the logic of writing. (The relationship of the examples and the analyses and The logic of the examples with analyses and the overall...
by Zhen S.
Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:16 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny
Replies: 7
Views: 7761

Re: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny

Dear Kate Thanks for your letter. After reading it, I understood that the parts of the genres may leave the overall claim to my readers. In my thinking, I wanted to analyze 2 parts – social-historical backgrounds and film genres to lead to the answer of “keep on” or “give up”. In the latter part, I ...
by Zhen S.
Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:15 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny
Replies: 7
Views: 7761

Re: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny

Dear Matthew Thanks for your letter. I will focus on my expression in my composition in the last version. I am very grateful to you for understanding the difficulties between two languages. In fact, I haven’t known that my expression has such problems. When we are in middle schools, sentences were u...
by Zhen S.
Fri Apr 12, 2019 3:15 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: Women’s Rights and the Pursuit of Happiness
Replies: 8
Views: 9158

Re: Women’s Rights and the Pursuit of Happiness

Dear Matthew, Thanks for you shateing your composition. I really enjoyed reading your analysis. And now, I would like to give you some personal opinions and advice after reading and thinking. In my general reaction, your composition has strong logic and the general topic you chose is easy to underst...
by Zhen S.
Fri Apr 12, 2019 3:14 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: Empowerment Through Teaching
Replies: 5
Views: 6975

Re: Empowerment Through Teaching

Dear Katherine Thanks for you sharing your composition. I really enjoyed reading your analysis. And now, I would like to give you some personal opinions and advice after reading and thinking. While reading your composition, I can easily find out and understand its theme and the meaning of your sente...
by Zhen S.
Wed Apr 10, 2019 12:38 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny
Replies: 7
Views: 7761

If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny

If We Can’t Always Defeat the Destiny – My Critique of Mona Lisa Smile and And the Spring Comes 180102 孙祯 Zhen Sun To be or not to be, that is the question. When striving to realize your ideal, you may feel you can’t break off the dilemmas which you have begun fighting against in your destiny. Which...