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Reflections After several exchanges with Leah and Davie Lee, I have made some revisions. For instance, Davie suggested that maybe I should use only 2 conjunctions in the sentences to keep them not as long. Because he noticed that multiple of my sentences contained more than 2 or 3 commas in them. Al...

A Review of Mona Lisa Smile and And the Spring Comes(revised) 180105 陈晓雪 Over the past weekend, I have seen two films. One is Mona Lisa Smile, directed by Mike Newell in 2003; the other is And the Spring Comes, in which my favorite actress— Jiang Wen Li performed, directed by Gu Chang Wei in 2007. A...

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Hi, Leah :D. I have consideered your suggestion to make another paragraph to explain why I prefer Jiang Wenli. It's good. But maybe it's a little bit missing the point :) . After all, it's a review of both films. Anyway, thanks for your kind suggestion! ;) . Maybe I can tell you why I like her in th...

Thanks, David! I also want to cut some of my sentences to make the entire passage more concise. Your suggestions are very helpful for me . Thanks again!

Thanks Leah . I will definitely take it into consideration!

Good Luck, Leah

After reading your article, I found it well-organized as well as coherent. And the passage has its focus statement- the struggles of women in different cultures. ;) However, there are many grammatical mistakes. First of all, in paragraph 2 line 3, the sentence"... struggled with her appearance ...

After reading your passage, I can't agree more on some of your opinions, such as the ethos as well as the equality betwwen men and women and you also talked about Betty- the student to support your contention. As far as I am concerned, you have focused on the empowerment of women and try to call for...

A Review of Mona Lisa Smile and And the Spring Comes 180105 陈晓雪 Xiaoxue Chen On the past weekend, I have seen two films. One is Mona Lisa Smile , directed by Mike Newell in 2003; the other is And the Spring Comes , in which my favorite actress— Jiang Wen Li performed, directed by Gu Chang Wei in 200...