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Dear Leah,

thanks!
I surely will take your advice into consideration and try to develop a deep analysis .
Lucky to know you~~~~

Hi David, Thank you for your advice :D I will definately add the actresses' last name, making an all -- side introduction about the two films. Thank you ;) For the rearrangement of paragraphys, I am afriad I have to partly stick to my original arrangement. cus as you can see, there are two main part...

Hi Leah, It is really a good idea to add more analyses to the lyrics, which will certainly help readers have a deeper understanding on my views. ;) And there are some scens where Katherine failed to change others. Since the two endings are different, do you mean that I can expand the analysis to&quo...

Very clear start! Brief and to the point. :D The structure is really good, but I think maybe you can add some transitional sentences to the two parts that lead to your following paragraph~~ for example,maybe you can break the second para into two paragraph from the sentence" However, each of th...

Nice start! I really like the slow slide from our morden life into your topic. The analysis about 'Mona Lisa Smile' is really profond. And the main idea "success can also be a kind of beauty" is a nice point which I cannot agree more But I think maybe you can write Katherine before her stu...

Thank you Leah :D I appreciate your suggestion! Indeed, it would be much better to list out the names of the actors, making readers better known about the films. But for the second advice, I probably need to stick to my arrangement cuz as you can see, there are two main parts in my film review -- th...

Stick to Your Happiness 180108 郭禹呈 Yicheng Guo Recently, I have watched two films -- And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile. The former is a film directed by Gu Changwei in 2008, in which Jiang Wenli starred. The latter is a film directed by Michael in 2003, in which Julia starred. Similarly, the ...