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Border-Crossing Activity Reflection 180122 肖镁铌 It’s a golden opportunity to take part in this Border-Crossing Activity. From this activity, I have learned a lot and had some thoughts to share with you . First, I have revised my draft according to some of the suggestions by American students. My Amer...

And the Spring Comes versus Mona Lisa Smile 180122; 肖镁铌 In the past weekend, I saw two films called And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile. The former one was a Chinese film directed by Changwei Gu in 2008, while the later one was created by American director Michel Wale in 2004. Even the two film...

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Hi Zion! I am very delighted to receive your feedback and I want to share some of my ideas with you. You mentioned that if I clearly show the points that I am going to focus on in my first paragraph and recap them in my closing point, I will make readers more impressed in my essay. Well that's reall...

Hi Paige! Thanks for your feedback and sorry for responding it late. I think your comments are very helpful for me and I will use them to improve my next draft. And after receiving your feedback, I would like to share some of my ideas with you. For the last sentence in my first paragraph, you advise...

Hi Zion, Thanks for the sharing. I really enjoy reading your essay and get a better understanding about the movies through your comparison between their different strategies. And here I want to add several my personal opinions. In your first paragraph, you wrote that"Both of these films depict ...

Hi Paige， I’m very delighted to have an opportunity to share ours ideas to the movies. Indeed, you have done a quite good job. There has been a logical order and clear relationship among your ideas. Actually, your essay reminded me some deeper points in the movies that I haven’t found in my writing....

And the Spring Comes versus Mona Lisa Smile 180122; 肖镁铌 Meini Xiao In the past weekend, I saw two films called And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile . The former one was a Chinese film directed by Changwei Gu in 2008, while the later one was created by American director Michel Wale in 2004. Even...