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Dear Tierra,
Thanks for your advice, I am going to make me more native in speaking English.

Dear, I had post my corrected essay again in the attachment. Thank you for comments very much. :) ;) In these-day exchange, I found something good as well as something poor in my review essay. After your advice, I think I have several points to improve. Firstly, I should balance my opinions and the ...

Thanks very much. I am going to learn more about that.

Dear Lauren,
I am so sorry that I can not log in that link because of the Intrenet limited, could you please stick some of them for me? Thank you a lot.

it is a pity that i didn't have a film class before. Alhough I also will watch some films from time to time, I nearly go very deep into the idea behind the film. Maybe I will try to do it in the future. Thanks for reply.

Dear Tierra and Lauren, From both of your replies, I find some shortcomings in my essay: 1. Some grammar mistakes and poor in usage of words and sentences. 2. I cannot go to deep into the films and catch some exact details to make my opinions concise and explicit, which makes me just express myself ...

Dear Tierra,
I am so sorry to check your reply for me, please give me some time to look over it and I am sure my essay will be much better under your reply. Thank you.

Dear Tirra, Hello. In my essay, I also foucus on some different paths to success chosen by Americans and Chinese. However, I think I just went very light on it. In my learning environment, I exactly don't konw enough those different life styles or ideas between Ameicans and Chinese. Would you please...

Dear Lauren,
I noticed that nearly all of you had taken the skills of making a film, and I am wonder why if you have some courses on it or you learn it at the beginning of writing this essay? I am looking for your reply . Thank you.

Dear Lauren:
Good evening maybe. It is so glad to have a read on your essay. In my opinion, you are very good at comparing and analying the two films and use right expressions to deliver your idea. More about my reply will be present in the attachment files. I am iooking forward to your reply too.