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- Wed Apr 24, 2019 12:10 am
- Forum: Group G
- Topic: The Light and the Shadow
- Replies: 5
- Views: 6827
Re: The Light and the Shadow
Hello Yijing, I thought you drew very good conclusion about the movies and made some great points. To strengthen your essay I recommend the following: 1. In the opening paragraph , you give a particular analysis about the main points of each movie, but after reading the paper fully, it seems as if ...
- Tue Apr 23, 2019 3:47 am
- Forum: Group G
- Topic: The Light and the Shadow
- Replies: 5
- Views: 6827
Re: The Light and the Shadow
Hi Yijing Fan, Great essay! I made some comments in the document attached. Thanks, Lauren Sonsteby Thank you for correcting my article! For your third note asking for more detail about the sentence "So any of her association with those 'mortals', can let her inner belief shake" ,I'm here ...
- Sun Apr 14, 2019 4:52 pm
- Forum: Group G
- Topic: LIFE COMPLEXITY & THE PATH TO SUCCESS THROUGH CHINESE AND AMERICAN CULTURAL LENSES
- Replies: 7
- Views: 8401
Re: LIFE COMPLEXITY & THE PATH TO SUCCESS THROUGH CHINESE AND AMERICAN CULTURAL LENSES
I hope it's not too late!! I really enjoy every word while reading your essay.
- Sun Apr 14, 2019 4:29 pm
- Forum: Group G
- Topic: Finding Similarities Between Women
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7559
Re: Finding Similarities Between Women
Here's my review on your essays, I highly appreciate the phrasing of yours!
- Wed Apr 10, 2019 8:05 pm
- Forum: Group G
- Topic: The Light and the Shadow
- Replies: 5
- Views: 6827
The Light and the Shadow
The Light and the Shadow 180807 方艺静 Yijing Fan Everyone knows the famous Mona Lisa painted by Leonardo di ser Piero da Vinci, but the paint’s eponymous film, Mona Lisa Smile is also a great film because of its impressive interpretation and attitude towards women’s rights. Every Chinese knows the beg...