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Reflection Li Boxin Cao Biqin We benefit a lot from this trans-oceanic interactive activity.Firstly, it is a great opportunity for us to communicate with native speakers. Through this activity, we learn the American students writing style and see that the words and expressions of their article is mo...

Revised Essay: Self-awareness & Collective Unconsciousness Cao Biqin Li Boxin After watching the two movies, Mona Lisa Smile, And the Spring comes, we learn that Wang cailing and Waston are alienated from most people in the society. This article will focus on the relationship of self-awareness a...

Dear Guo, Liang, Thank you for the comments. "Different destinies," I think it is inappropriate in there, because it is irrelevant to the context. I have also noticed that the first paragraph need improvements. However, I do not work out a start so far. If you have some idea, just tell me....

Dear Megan,
Thank you again for your suggestions! It really helps me improve my article. I will continue to revise article. After revising, we will post it on the website. If you have time, you can give us other suggestions.
It is nice to work with you!
Cao Biqin
Li Boxin

Dear Guo，Liang, Thank you for the messages. We will answer your questions.Yes, as you said, for those people who haven't seen the movie, the plot of Catherine and Betty's third quarrel is really necessary. We think it may help you to simplify the paragraph by changing the complex sentence pattern in...

Hi Megan, Thank you for the messages. I would like to explain the background of And the Spring Comes to you. There were a set of basic moral principles specially for women in ancient China that affected Chinese for a long time. It was hoped that women should get married and have kids. Though women's...

Dear Heidi, Thank you for the comments. Actually, I have also noticed that there exists ambiguity about self-awareness and collective unconsciousness in my article. Megan, Guo and Liang, they also point out this problem. I have explained this to them. You can read my reply to them. Hopefully that he...

Hi Megan, I am glad to receive your reply. Here, I would try to make some suggestions. In the first paragraph, you mention women's empowerment. I think you want to put women's empowerment as the core of your article. In the second paragraph, you make a comparison and contrast of the two protagonists...

Dear Heidi, Thank you for the messages. I read your article again. Here, I would like to make another suggestion. In the third paragraph, you mention "this modernism is present in both films to portray the problematic pursuit of these women's dream." To avoid any ambiguity, maybe you can s...

Dear Guo and Liang, I have received you replay and I will try to answer your questions. For example, the penultimate paragraph of the article. You mainly want to express Mona Lisa's Smile is good at hinting. You've listed Betty and Catherine's duels throughout the movie to confirm your point. Though...