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Reflection We all agree that this is a good learning opportunity! Through this transoceanic interactive activity, first of all, we can communicate with native speakers. This activity shortens the gap between us and American students, so we all cherish and attach importance to it! Secondly, it is bec...

Revised Essay: A Movie Review about Women's Rights The film "Mona Lisa Smile" depicts the United States in 1953, when times are changing. Katherine, who graduated from the open-minded University of Berkeley, went to Wesleyan Girls' School to teach art history. She has revolutionary leading...

Hi Cao and Li! We think the opening paragraph of the essay is suitable. It is to the point that you draw out the theme you want to express through the two protagonists. Maybe you can delete the last sentence, because "on account of different factors, they have different destines." requires...

Hi, Megan! I think your interpretation of "yi"" makes a lot of sense. "yi" originally means "appropriate", that is, behavior is suitable for "li". Confucius used "yi" as the moral principle to judge people's thought and behavior. In our opinion,...

Hello Megan, We are very interested in your mention of Yi and Li. In our understanding, Yi is the sense of responsibility and responsibility of one's own life. Can you talk about the meaning of these two Chinese words that you understand? We are very curious about how Confucian culture is taught abr...

Hi, Cao and Li, We are glad to hear from you.! We have also considered the problem that changing complex sentences to simple sentences will change the original meaning, and we will carefully consider it before we find a solution. Thank you again. In the communication with other students, she mention...

Hi Heidi, We are glad to have your feedback on our suggestion. After reading your article again, we think that there is one more point that you can improve, that is, when you comment on the Chinese film And the spring comes, you not only summarize the plot but also write about the shooting technique...

Hi,Megan, Thank you for your advice! We will consider the suggestion you mentioned and use subheadings to divide long paragraphs. Subheadings can also give readers some reading tips while dividing paragraphs. And we will read our articles again, reduce the semantic repetition of sentences, and short...

Hello Megan, Thank you very much for your detailed explanation of our questions! After reading your explanation and guidance, we understand what you mean and how to change our article. Indeed, as you said, the tone in a film is an important tool for rendering the atmosphere and side expression of th...

Hello Heidi! Thank you for your affirmation of our comments. Reading your article again, we think it is good to compare the two films from the perspective of Chinese and American culture. Here, we would like to make two suggestions. On the one hand, maybe your space design is a little unreasonable. ...