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Reflection At the beginning of the border-activity, we intend to get in touch with native English speakers and have a good communication with them about writing, so as to improve our intercultural communication ability. In fact,through this border-crossing activity, we did gain a lot of valuable exp...

Hi Gabrielle, Thank you very much for your revision. We have to admit that we have made many simple grammatical mistakes. This revision is very important to us. In the cross-border interaction, we realize that we should pay more attention to the logic and grammar in writing. In the future, we will c...

Hi Steven, We did not realize that our report contains so many grammar mistakes until we checked the pdf you sent to me. Because of Corona virus, it is hard for us to contact each other directly. Which unfortunately means that this report is not well-prepared. We would pay more attention on the gram...

Hello Gabrielle Stewart(There are two members in our group.One is Xin Zheng, another is Xinyi Yu.) Thank you so much for your advice! We will improve our writing in paragraphs according to your advice. We will make it more relevant to the main idea of pursuing dreams. In addition, we are glad to rec...

Hi Steven Toomey! We are glad to receive your suggestion. Thank you very much. Indeed, our review leaves a lot to be improved. We agree that there are problems in the transition and break of paragraphs. We will revise these paragraphs according to your suggestion. As for grammar, we have drawbacks. ...

Dear Lv and Liu, We are happy to hear from you. Thank you so much for your advice to our review! To be honest, just as you mentioned, some sentences are not directly connected with the theme. Though the last three paragraphs have good analysis of the two movies, it is off the point. We will adjust t...

Hi, Steven We feel it a pleasure to have the chance to communicate with you about our review. Since we have read it, we both agree that it is an excellent review. The review clearly compares the concept of women's marriage in the two movies. Tradition encourages women to get married. In the film Mon...

Dear Lu Miao&Liu Tingxuan First of all, we want to express our appreciation for your group's film reviews. This is a very logical article, which has not only the detailed narration of the film, but also the prominent central idea after comparing the contents of the two films. However, we suggest...

Hi，Gabrielle We are glad to have the opportunity to share our own perspectives of these movies with you. This whole film review takes marriage and social culture as the point of penetration and does well in storytelling. In the narration of the main characters of the film, the plot and details are v...

The two movies Mona Lisa Smile and And the Spring Comes depict the relationship between dream and reality. However, due to the differences of era and cultural backgrounds, the characters made different choices when facing contradictions and future. The movie Mona Lisa Smile describes a warm story wh...