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Reflection From this opportunity of communicating with foreign students, we both think that have learn a lot that cannot be learnt from textbooks. So we really thanks for both teachers and foreign friends. In the first place, we‘d appreciate it our teacher offer us this opportunity to communicate wi...

Revision: Movie Review Today our group is going to make reviews on two movies: “And the Spring Comes” and “Mona Lisa Smile”. Both of them have demonstrated point of views on women’s empowerment dramatically. “And the Spring Comes” was released in 2007. Wenli Jiang, Yao Zhang, Guangjie Li were the ma...

Hi, Stewart We are really happy that you can take our suggestions into consideration. And your revision is commendable which shows your hardworking spirits. That is very important in the study life. What's more, thanks for your long-time interactions with us, especially your valuable advice on our w...

Hi Steven Toomey,
It’s our pleasure to offer you advice. And we think the communication really does good to both of us. Thanks for your remark and revision. We will check our grammatical errors in detail. Thanks again.
Yours,
Miao Lu & Tingxuan Liu

Hi, Stewart Thank you for your replying. We think that your suggestions help us a lot in further enhancing our article. Just like you mention in the last that our last paragraph does not summarize the whole text, which is the biggest problem in the passage. So we will pay more attention to rewriting...

Dear Steven Toomey, We are glad to hear your comment. Your suggestion really works. Thank you very much. We also consider the description and expression in the first three paragraphs are too tedious. And some generalized statements should be omitted. We will make some adjustments in the revision lat...

Dear Zheng&Yu,
Thank you for your comment. We also consider the description and expression in the first three paragraphs are too tedious. We will make some adjustments in the revision.
Thanks again. Love you!
Yours,
Lu&Liu

Dear Xin Zheng, Xinyi Yu In general, you have written a good passage. Your article combine lots of scenes from the movies, making the analysis more persuasive. And the logic of this passage is very clear. Just like the title : What are we looking for in life as a human being? In your following writi...

Hi, Steven We are really happy to communicate with you. After reading your article, We think there are so many things deserving our learning. At the beginning of your passage, you directly demonstrate the theme, which renders the reader have a grasp of what you are going to show in the following wri...

Hi Garielle! We are honored to have this opportunity to interact with you. After reading your essay, we find it fabulous not only in form but also in content. We consider that you focus on the attitude towards marriage from the female perspective. Even though there are so many differences in cultura...