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Reflection: In our interaction with American students, we have learned a lot. We evaluated each other's film reviews and gave corresponding opinions and suggestions. In this process, we find that American students are different from Chinese students. First of all, we are always used to using a large...

Hi He Weiqi & Song Xinran,
Thanks for your appreciation. Hope to see your next better essay!
Best,
Sven &Li Lin.

Dear Natalie,
Thanks for your appreciation! It's so nice of you to listen to our advice. We look forward to seeing your next draft. Maybe we can communicate more about films and reviews later.

Best,
Sven Xue.

Hi Natalie, This is our revised version. Welcome to read and feel free to say anything about this! And the Spring Comes  is a drama directed by Gu Changwei. The film tells the story of Wang Cailing and other young artists struggling in the contradiction between dream and reality in a small county in...

Hi Danny, This is my revised first paragrapgh: And the Spring Comes is a drama directed by Gu Changwei. The film tells the story of Wang Cailing and other young artists struggling in the contradiction between dream and reality in a small county in 1980s. The film is a story of the disillusionment of...

Hello Danny Thank you very much for your advice. As for the lack of details in the first paragraph of your introduction, I have considered it carefully. After I wrote it, I read it again. At that time, I thought the first paragraph was a bit lengthy, but if I deleted some content, I could not expres...

Hi Natalie, Thank you for the reply before. Our communication is required by our teacher of this course. The more we contact with each other, the higher grade we will acquire. Could you help us communicate more? What do you think of our replies? You can say anything about our essays or our replies f...

Hi Daniel, our communication is required by our teacher of this course. The more we contact with each other, the higher grade we will acquire. Could you help us communicate more? You can say anything about our essays or our replies for you. Hope to have a nice talk with you! If you have any question...

Hi He Weiqi, This film review is different from the others, and straightforwardly introduces the two films separately. First, the two female figures in Mona Lisa smile are introduced, and the two characters are compared to highlight the artistic effect of the movie. But I think when introducing this...

Hello Natalie, Thanks for your reply. I appreciate that you noticing our problem in the article. I will revise the review according to your suggestions later on. We will find more examples to support ou opinions. Moreover, I hope we can contact more with each other to exchange our ideas, to refine o...