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by 921649141
Wed Apr 29, 2020 12:46 am
Forum: Group H
Topic: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes
Replies: 12
Views: 11703

Re: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes

Thanks for offering such a precious opportunity for us to share and exchange ideas with the American students, from which, we learn a lot about cultural differences. Meanwhile, our writing skills may be improved owing to the discussion. We were holding great expectation on this interaction as it mig...
by 921649141
Wed Apr 29, 2020 12:44 am
Forum: Group H
Topic: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes
Replies: 12
Views: 11703

Re: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes

Beauty and ugliness-Mona Lisa smile V.S. And the Spring Comes Movies are made from different cultures and periods yet they share a common theme. Mona Lisa Smile directed by Mike Newell, who always used kind of elegant British style, presented the audience with a scroll of beauty, where the heroin wa...
by 921649141
Tue Apr 28, 2020 1:51 pm
Forum: Group H
Topic: Cultural Essay
Replies: 13
Views: 12225

Re: Cultural Essay

Generally, the essay focused on the pursuing dreams under the condition of hardships from the perspective of students’ respect and women roles in marriage. It is marvelous that the organization and design is very clear due to the subject sentences’ conciseness. Also, the evidences abstracted from t...
by 921649141
Tue Apr 28, 2020 1:39 pm
Forum: Group H
Topic: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes
Replies: 12
Views: 11703

Re: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes

I’m going to type a few minors errors/ corrections/ suggestions to you, these are again very minor so your audience can still understand your essay regardless if it is corrected or not. The first sentence in the first paragraph, “Here are two movies from different cultures and period, showing the c...
by 921649141
Fri Apr 24, 2020 1:03 pm
Forum: Group H
Topic: Cultural Essay
Replies: 13
Views: 12225

Re: Cultural Essay

Hello, I may need to add a sentence or alter my paragraph to make it my statement more clear to the audience. I agree with what you're saying and that's what I was trying to portray within a paragraph, showing the culture differences between the students through respecting/ not respecting their eld...
by 921649141
Fri Apr 24, 2020 6:24 am
Forum: Group H
Topic: Cultural Essay
Replies: 13
Views: 12225

Re: Cultural Essay

Hi,Mackenzie. U mentioned that the respect of students to teacher is very important. I can’t agree with that any more. In the movie, I found most students were free to talk in class. This showed a kind of positive and active cultural factor. In China, we didn’t do that. Even nowadays, most of our st...
by 921649141
Tue Apr 21, 2020 2:27 am
Forum: Group H
Topic: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes
Replies: 12
Views: 11703

Re: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes

Hi,Nate. I have already sent an email to you. To be honest, there are a lot in your essay that require improving. I wish you may focus on one point in your essay. You may share your thoughts about the two movies or what you want to express with me when you are free.
by 921649141
Sun Apr 19, 2020 5:44 am
Forum: Group H
Topic: Cultural Essay
Replies: 13
Views: 12225

Re: Cultural Essay

Hello, Mackenzie. If you have any approaches like Wechat, maybe we can reply to each other in time. For the time difference and website delay, it is a little inconvenient. By the way, my Wechat number is wyr15050535495.
by 921649141
Sun Apr 19, 2020 5:42 am
Forum: Group H
Topic: Cultural Essay
Replies: 5
Views: 6041

Re: Cultural Essay

Hello, Nate. If you have any approaches like Wechat, maybe we can reply to each other in time. For the time difference and website delay, it is a little inconvenient. By the way, my Wechat number is wyr15050535495.
by 921649141
Sun Apr 19, 2020 5:27 am
Forum: Group H
Topic: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes
Replies: 12
Views: 11703

Re: Beauty and Ugliness: Mona Lisa Smile v.s. And the Spring Comes

Hi, Hu Yi. I believe you did read my article with sincerity, for what you said directly hit the merits and demerits. Thanks a lot. And I would follow your suggestions.