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- Tue May 12, 2020 12:11 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
- Replies: 12
- Views: 14523
Re: The sorrow of women in the old age
Reflection: 1) What were your expectations for the border -crossing activity? Are your expectations met? Why or why not? I hoped that I could learn different perspectives of looking at things and improve my ability of cooperation and communication in this activity. I think all my expectations have b...
- Mon May 11, 2020 12:08 pm
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
- Replies: 12
- Views: 14523
Re: The sorrow of women in the old age
Revision The sorrow of women in the old age Mona Lisa Smile tells the story of the United States in 1953, when the times are changing. Catherine, who graduated from the Open University of Berkeley, went to Wesley women's traditional college to teach history of traditional art. However, Catherine, wh...
- Tue Apr 21, 2020 2:48 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
- Replies: 12
- Views: 14523
Re: The sorrow of women in the old age
Hi Yuhang, Thank you so much for responding to my paper! When I know that you are a Chinese student, I am also very happy! As for your opinion of clearing the theme and filling in the details, I think it is very valid so I went back to reread my essay. In my back analysis of my essay, I feel like I ...
- Tue Apr 21, 2020 2:48 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
- Replies: 12
- Views: 14523
Re: The sorrow of women in the old age
Hi Cheng Penyu,
Thank you for the compliment! Which part do you think we should cut and adjust? Could you give us more specific advice?
Wu Qianlin, Ji Linjin
Thank you for the compliment! Which part do you think we should cut and adjust? Could you give us more specific advice?
Wu Qianlin, Ji Linjin
- Tue Apr 21, 2020 1:38 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
- Replies: 12
- Views: 14523
Re: The sorrow of women in the old age
Hi, Alex Thank you so much for responding to my paper! Your suggestion is very reasonable! In the process of finishing the whole article, we were intended to focus on the third part of the comparison. However, we spent much effort on expound, thus ignoring providing details. In paragragh7, perhaps w...
- Tue Apr 21, 2020 12:39 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
- Replies: 12
- Views: 14523
Re: The sorrow of women in the old age
Hi, Cheng Fengjie We are glad to hear from you.Thank you very much for your suggestions on our article! Your suggestion is very reasonable! Your suggestion that we should add more details to support our article, indeed, our whole article looks a bit empty due to lack of details. Maybe we put more at...
- Mon Apr 20, 2020 9:11 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
- Replies: 8
- Views: 8822
Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Hi Cheng Fengjie Thank you for your reply. If you want to correct the title, maybe you can exchange "strive for" for "fight against". If you must use the word"Male-dominated", I hope you can increase some details about how men influenced women in both movies. If you hav...
- Sat Apr 18, 2020 4:27 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
- Replies: 8
- Views: 8822
Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Dear Cheng Fengjie Hello, I am glad to read your article and know what you think of these two films. I have some personal opinions below, and I'm very glad that you can continue to read it. After reading your movie review, I think this review is complete and contains sufficient evidence to support t...
- Sat Apr 18, 2020 3:21 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: The Movie/Cultural Essay
- Replies: 8
- Views: 8563
Re: The Movie/Cultural Essay
Dear Yuhang Liu Hello, I am glad to read your article and know what you think of these two films. I have some personal opinions below, and I'm very glad that you can continue to read it. This article points directly to the theme--women’s empowerment and personal value, and accurately analyses the sh...
- Sat Apr 18, 2020 2:25 am
- Forum: Group I
- Topic: Cultural Essay
- Replies: 6
- Views: 6368
Re: Cultural Essay
Dear Alexander Alomar Hello, I am glad to read your article and know what you think of these two films. I have some personal opinions below, and I'm very glad that you can continue to read it. In terms of some details of the two movies, you retell them very well, but this part of the content in the ...