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by 3030843098
Wed Apr 29, 2020 8:05 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Replies: 8
Views: 8822

Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society

Reflection The way of this correcting the composition is different from the past, that is the form of a letter. I feel very happy and honored when the western students affirm my suggestion, which makes me more energetic to go further analysis. Through this interesting way, I really learn a lot from ...
by 3030843098
Wed Apr 29, 2020 8:03 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Replies: 8
Views: 8822

Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society

Hold "Ideal and Love" and Fight Against a Male-dominated Society — review of And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile We all know that in the past, for women, love and family are the only ones. Based on that unenlightened society, however, the protagonists of And the Spring Comes and Mona ...
by 3030843098
Sat Apr 25, 2020 7:58 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Cultural Essay
Replies: 6
Views: 6368

Re: Cultural Essay

Dear, Alexander Alomar I am very happy to receive your reply, and I can feel that you understand my meaning. I feel very honored and happy to know that others have affirmed my suggestion. Besides, your words and sentences are excellent, attentively and carefully. I noticed that you’re using the simp...
by 3030843098
Sat Apr 25, 2020 7:36 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The Movie/Cultural Essay
Replies: 8
Views: 8563

Re: The Movie/Cultural Essay

Dear Yuhang Liu, I am very happy to receive your reply, and I can feel that you understand my meaning. I think your essay is very succinct and clear, and that is exactly what I want to learn, because it is so cool with simply words and complete meaning. You know, sometimes, it is not necessarily a l...
by 3030843098
Fri Apr 24, 2020 12:33 pm
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 14523

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Hi, W/J I know the topic of your essay is about two parts and what I want to say is that you should make a generalization to include two parts at the beginning of the essay, so that our reader can grasp the point you want to tell us at the first sight. You do not to mix them, just tell us briefly, t...
by 3030843098
Mon Apr 20, 2020 7:28 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Replies: 8
Views: 8822

Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society

Hi,Yuhang Liu I am very happy to receive your reply. I was excited when I learned that you were a Chinese student who attends college in the United State. In terms of this essay, I know that the failing is lacked of the cultural difference between two countries. Although I argues many details of two...
by 3030843098
Mon Apr 20, 2020 7:11 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Replies: 8
Views: 8822

Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society

Hi, Wu / Ji I am very happy to receive your reply. You said that “the second half of the title “Strive for a Male-dominated” is slightly inappropriate, because the main point of the movie And the Spring comes isn’t aimed at male. ” Yes, you are right. Because I used an ambiguous phrase“strive for”in...
by 3030843098
Sun Apr 19, 2020 1:39 pm
Forum: Group I
Topic: The Movie/Cultural Essay
Replies: 8
Views: 8563

Re: The Movie/Cultural Essay

Dear Yuhang Liu I'm very glad to have this opportunity to communicate with you. These are some of my points of view, I hope we can help each other, absorb ideas, and continue to improve our film reviews. Please forgive me if I have made any mistakes. I can clearly see your opinions and thoughts from...
by 3030843098
Sun Apr 19, 2020 1:28 pm
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 14523

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Hi, Wu Qianlin I'm very glad to have this opportunity to communicate with you. These are some of my points of view, I hope we can help each other, absorb ideas, and continue to improve our film reviews. Your composition is very clear. I have my own opinion on the introduction of the film and I can s...
by 3030843098
Sun Apr 19, 2020 3:00 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 14523

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Hi, Wu Qianlin I’d like to share my views with you about this essay. Hope you can talk with me further later. Your essay is comparative complete, and you give a point-to-point analysis, which I think it is very clear and logical. And your writing is fluent and your thinking is advanced. The backgrou...