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Reflection： The border-crossing activity was a very fruitful activity for me. It lived up to my expectations. On the one hand, by reading the essays of U.S. students, I understand the writing methods of my peers who speak English as their native language. On the other hand, since I am not good at wr...

Modified essay： Women need to be their own dignities Li Yi and Xu Yiheng Last week, I saw two films, And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile. The ideas of feminism and the concept of self-pursuit reflected in them made me have profound thinking. First let me talk about And the Spring Comes. The fil...

Hi Li Shiyao! I'm glad you can point out the structure of our article, and I will fix it in the next time. Through the comparison of the articles, I realized that it is necessary to reduce the narrative of the movie plot. Thank you for your review. :D :D Looking forward to your next writing! : D Lo...

Hello Li Yi, I enjoyed reading your essay. There are some phrases that make it difficult to understand what you mean by that. You could explain what "leftover woman" means in terms of describing Cailing. You also say that she is as poor as a church. That phrasing is a little awkward. Chur...

Hi Li Yi. Great job on this essay! I thought you did a great job overall. Your uses of descriptive adjective and your word choice was fitting for this essay. I also enjoyed the style of writing that you chose to use. Both summaries of the essays were great and encompassed all the main points of the...

This is an article that I think is quite different from others. The first thing is its title, which shows that this is an article with "reality" as the theme, which I think is relatively new. In addition, they pointed out at the beginning of the article that the analysis should be made fr...

Hi, Lucero. I like the front of the article on the “And the Spring Comes” in the analysis of Cai-ling. She expresses her feelings through music, which we have not discovered yet. The article also analyzes the clothing styles of her. She is no more fashionable than the general public. The gay dancer,...

Hi, Alvin. Your essay is excellent, and I like it too. You are very careful so you can discover the existence of Van Gogh in both movies, and this is something I did not notice. It turned out that the two movies also hinted at Van Gogh's ideology of refusing to compromise. Thanks for your essay, so ...

Hi Li Shiyao!
I'm glad you can point out the structure of our article, and I will fix it in the next time. Through the comparison of the articles, I realized that it is necessary to reduce the narrative of the movie plot. Thank you for your review.

This is an article that I think is quite different from others. The first thing is its title, which shows that this is an article with "reality" as the theme, which I think is relatively new. In addition, they pointed out at the beginning of the article that the analysis should be made fro...