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by 1595877752
Fri Apr 24, 2020 6:12 am
Forum: Group M
Topic: Cultural Analysis
Replies: 8
Views: 7655

Re: Cultural Analysis

Dear Fei, I am happy that you enjoyed reading my writing. The one that I focus on when writing is that it is at least enjoyable to read, even if the audience may disagree with my point. Admittedly, I was surprised to see that you described how life is full of struggles but that should not stop us f...
by 1595877752
Fri Apr 24, 2020 3:22 am
Forum: Group M
Topic: Growth and Success: Impressions of And Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile
Replies: 5
Views: 5646

Re: Growth and Success: Impressions of And Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile

Dear Fei, I'm so glad that my comments were of some help! I hope that it not only helps you in revising your paper but that your future writing will improve as a result! I actually have a quick question about your paper, and I am curious on your thoughts. You mention how both films focus on success...
by 1595877752
Wed Apr 22, 2020 1:07 am
Forum: Group M
Topic: Growth and Success: Impressions of And Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile
Replies: 5
Views: 5646

Re: Growth and Success: Impressions of And Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile

I like the writer's focus on the films' portrayal of success and growth, as they are important themes throughout each narrative. The writer's main idea can be further expanded by describing why the movies focus on success and growth, and also how both cultures approach said themes. While the author...
by 1595877752
Sat Apr 18, 2020 12:00 am
Forum: Group M
Topic: Film review
Replies: 7
Views: 7176

Re: Film review

1. The beginning of the article is concise, which makes a general summary of the two films. And each topic sentence is written at the beginning, which is straightforward. 2. It's striking to analyze the differences between the two films from the perspective of color tone. 3. Maybe one or two points ...
by 1595877752
Fri Apr 17, 2020 12:47 am
Forum: Group M
Topic: Cultural Analysis
Replies: 8
Views: 7655

Re: Cultural Analysis

At the beginning, the author indicates the theme through brief introduction, which we should not make choices based on society’s expectations, but instead to choose who we want to be and how we want to be their desired profession. And then, based on the detailed plots, the author minutely expounds t...
by 1595877752
Tue Apr 14, 2020 1:27 am
Forum: Group M
Topic: Growth and Success: Impressions of And Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile
Replies: 5
Views: 5646

Growth and Success: Impressions of And Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile

Fei Yang Mona Lisa Smile is a plot film produced by the American Revolutionary film studio in 2003. The film tells the story of America in 1953. The time is changing. Catherine, who graduated from the Open University of Berkeley, went to Wesley women's school to teach art history. However, Catherine...