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1)Going into the border-crossing activity, I expected to see comments that focused on our essays’ grammatical structure more so than the content. For some reason, it never occurred to me that my group would talk about the content of the writing. It seemed natural that we would learn from our writing...

Revised Cultural Analysis And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile’s protagonists both strive to define themselves in spite of their culture’s expectations of them in order to be personally satisfied with their lives. In And The Spring Comes Cai-ling Wang wants to become an opera singer, but her pro...

Dear Fei, I am happy that you enjoyed reading my writing. The one that I focus on when writing is that it is at least enjoyable to read, even if the audience may disagree with my point. Admittedly, I was surprised to see that you described how life is full of struggles but that should not stop us fr...

Dear Zhou, Thank you for your kind words about my writing, I was moved by it and I'd imagine you are also somebody who follows their heart as well. Your question about my point regarding Cailing' Wang having a happy ending is a great discussion question, and you make a valid point. After all, she do...

Dear Fei, I'm so glad that my comments were of some help! I hope that it not only helps you in revising your paper but that your future writing will improve as a result! I actually have a quick question about your paper, and I am curious on your thoughts. You mention how both films focus on success ...

Dear Zhou, Your essay brings up multiple interesting talking points about the films that are definitely worth exploring. In particular, your analysis of the films as showing women being empowered and not being dependant on masculine figures is a great point. Even though And the Spring Comes ends wit...

I like the writer's focus on the films' portrayal of success and growth, as they are important themes throughout each narrative. The writer's main idea can be further expanded by describing why the movies focus on success and growth, and also how both cultures approach said themes. While the author ...

Joe Brili And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smile’s protagonists both strive to define themselves in spite of their culture’s expectations of them in order to be personally satisfied with their lives. In And The Spring Comes Cai-ling Wang wants to become an opera singer, but her profession expects ...