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Hey Li Lin!

I like the idea of having more details, especially in the first paragraph. One thing I would warn you about is to make sure that the details you include are pushing your argument further. You didn't do that in your initial draft, but I just wanted to warn you. LOL

Hello He Weiqi, I agree with Natalie when she said you should look for a way to combine or contrast the themes for the next draft. I like your writing a lot, but I'd be careful with the word "feudal." While the word does mean "extremely old fashioned," the first thought is toward...

Hey Xue Siwen, Your essay structure is easily followable. I love the title! I like that you start with addressing both movies, and in subsequent paragraphs you break up the films before rejoining them at the end of the analysis. You should add more details in the key moments of you argument. One key...

Daniel Wilhelm The role of the teacher takes in both the movie And the Spring Comes and the movie Mona Lisa Smile. Wang Tsai Ling is a vocal performance teacher. Katherine Watson is as art history professor. Along with strong female leads, the movie emphasizes the dedication educators take like putt...