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My expectations for this activity were to change thoughts and learn from other people's writing styles and, indeed, I've learned a lot from my group members. They have given me very useful and practical suggestions, and to get to know their thoughts about different cultures is a new experience. I've...

Female liberty and the pursuit of personal value, no matter what kind of cultures they are in, are always being put in a prominent position. Some women were striving for their rights and liberty by challenging backward social norms and some others were struggling for personal value under criticism a...

Hey Jhon, Thank you for your suggestions, and I think I should reorganize some of my structures because they are really disordered and not easy to read. I really appreciate your writing style that is to the point and concise. I always bear on my mind that English writing is not like Chinese which is...

Hi Yuanping, Your essay is impressive for its logic, clear structure and reflections. I really appreciate that you made a general introduction of the two movies in the first part of the essay which enables the readers to get the points quickly, and you did very well in the transitions in your essay ...

Hey Yixiong, Your essay is rather clear and logical while that of mine is just like what you have mentioned as disordered haha. You have mentioned that both movies have the same style, that is, to show feminism in some similar or different ways. You have made your points very clear by exploring the ...

Hey John, Your paper is impressive for its logic and structure, and, there are many in depth thoughts you have mentioned. Your paper is well organized compared to mine which is somewhat disordered. You have emphasized the importance of female independence, and gone deep into the social norms and ine...

Hey Yixiong, Your essay is rather clear and logical while that of mine is just like what you have mentioned as disordered haha. You have mentioned that both movies have the same style, that is, to show feminism in some similar or different ways. You have made your points very clear by exploring the ...

Hey John, Your paper is impressive for its logic and structure, and, there are many in depth thoughts you have mentioned. Your paper is well organized compared to mine which is somewhat disordered. You have emphasized the importance of female independence, and gone deep into the social norms and ine...

Mona Lisa’s Smile is a film about the arranged life of American girls in the 1950s after the second World War. The leading actor, Katherine Watson, who got a position as an instructor in the art department in the most conservative college in America, was determined to make changes there. At the begi...