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Hi Wanyi! Sorry about the delay on replying you the comment, I am so glad that you could somehow agree with my opinion, and if that is possible, we could discuss the opera in person when next week in person when I arrive in Nanjing. I went to do some research about the singing part of the movie shot...

Revised Essay Analysis Between “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And the Spring Comes” And the spring comes, but does it make a difference? In traditional Chinese thinking, people referred spring to hope and confidence, but in the movie “ After the Spring Comes” The spring would always come, but the spring of ...

Hi Jinfeng! I'm so glad to hear back from you about your opinion on both characters, not surprised that you chose Katerine instead of Miss Wang. I totally agree with your analysis of the development on both of them, however, I still have other thoughts besides their personality as for human being ma...

Hi Wanyi! I am so happy to have your response to my comments as well as your opinion on Cailing's professional skills. I went back and re-read your essay after reading your explanation of your idea in the paragraph and I realized that I misunderstand your point of carrying out the relatively passive...

Hi Mikaela Thanks for sharing your idea. I do agree with that Cailing have up her career dream in the end because she changed her goal.But being a good mother is the common idea of success back in the day, rather she did not choose to be a wife which is still showing she does not want to just follow...

Hi Jinfeng! I really like how you organized your essay by narrowing down the movie to give support evidence and how you focus on the theme of social mobility for both movies. I think it could make your essay better to include more of your personal opinions in the essay while you are doing your work....

Hi Wanyi Sorry about the lack of responding your essay due to a little bit of technology error I have met with this system earlier. I'm really pleased with the way how you narrow down your essay with the leading sentence in front of each body paragraph to show your central idea of it. In your essay,...

Hi Mikaela Thank you so much for responding my essay. I really like the suggestion you gave about the content of my essay, I do agree that I somehow missed my own opinion when I was narrowing down the essay. I would try to go back to my theme while developing the evidence to support it. I think the ...

Hi Jinfeng Thank you so much for giving suggestions with the structure of my essay, those are very helpful and I would like to make adjustments on my essay based on your idea to separate the essay into two parts. When I'm watching movies, it is always the first thing for me to check the camera angle...

And the spring comes, but does it make a difference? In traditional Chinese thinking, people referred spring to hope and confidence, but in the movie “And the Spring Comes” spring would always come, but the spring of Cailing Wang never comes. Instead, I think to switch the titles between those two m...