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Before participating in the Border Crossing Activity, I did not understand the purpose of this activity. I thought it was just another writing assignment regarding the two films that we had seen. Surprisingly, I did gain many different perspectives regarding the two films. It was interesting being a...

The focus of this paper is on two movies “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And when the Spring Comes”. “Mona Lisa Smile” is an American film set in the 1950s at a private women’s liberal arts school known as Wellesley College. “And when the Spring Comes” is a film set in the 1980s in a rural industrial town in...

Elizabeth, thank you for taking the time to provide me with feedback. I think the focus of my paper is on success and the means to achieve it for women in a time period that is conservative. I will certainly take your comments into consideration when writing my final draft.

Xuan, thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I will definitely add more detail to the third paragraph and explain more on what success means to each of the characters.

Xuan, thanks for taking my comments into consideration. I do understand where you are coming from. However, I still think it's honestly personal preference when it comes to music or art. For example, I like to listen to soft and mellow music, but you might like edm music or rap. However, just becaus...

Hi Elizabeth! You did a great job introducing eastern and western rhetoric in your introduction. It would be awesome if you could add in the two film titles so the audience know exactly what films you are referring to. I loved the flow and style of your essay. Especially, in the third paragraph wher...

Hi Xuan! I loved how instead of putting the spotlight strictly on the two main characters of the film, Wangcai Ling and Katherine Watson, you provided examples of other characters like Huang SIbao, ZhouYu, Betty and Joan. However, I would have to disagree with you on your perspective of WangCaiLing’...

Hi Jing, I would have to agree with Elizabeth that the title of your essay really grabbed my attention. I thought it was interesting how the statement, “To be or not to be is a question” was the first thing that crossed your mind after watching the two films. You mentioned that both films focused on...

The focus of this paper is on two movies “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And when the Spring Comes”. “Mona Lisa Smile” is an American film set in the 1950s at a private women’s liberal arts school known as Wellesley College. “And when the Spring Comes” is a film set in the 1980s in a rural industrial town in...