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Hi Zihong Thank you for your reply! I am so happy from read from you. All the points you made are clear and positive, and I am really appreciate what you did! I hope you did well on your mid-term, and I totally understand your situation. I read your answers to my questions carefully, and I like the ...

Hi Zihong, You summarized two movies very well. I am sure that even someone have never watched those movies, they still get it. But, I would like to see more thoughts from you. I like when you talk about your feelings about the movies. You wrote "On our journey to the unorthodoxy, we are consta...

Hi Jieyan, "However, the road to development and growth for women are tough, whether they are well-educated or not. " some sentences like this are confusing. I understand what you mean but I don't think it is the best structure. I highly encourage you to read some similar sentences wrote b...

Hi Jieyan, I see you compared those women from the movie and talked about their decisions about marriage. Clearly, they made different decisions because of the different situations. You write "Wang Cailin is a different case because she chooses not to marry even though a man proposes to her twi...

Hi Jieyan, It is interesting that you started your paper with a story and I've know that is definitely a fact. I noticed that you used the first person, the second person and also the third person in your paper, and that is confusing. Most time, for not confusing readers, the writer will only use on...

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Hi Zihong, It is great that you talked about both movies together rather than separately. Under the compare, it is more clear to see the difference between the cultures and personalities. To improve the paper, I think you should add more details to support your ideas. Such as Katherine decides to fi...

When Spring Comes, and Mona Lisa Smile are both excellent movies that show the audience the social and self-identity problems in the completely different period and cultures. When Spring Comes is about a woman who lives in a small town in China and has a big dream of being a musician. She has the ta...