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Here is my revised essay. Sorry to post it so late .Thank you all for providing me with these valuable comments and broadening my mind. In both the Spring comes and Mona Lisa smile, there are girls who meet a dilemma choosing to pursue their dreams or to lead an ordinary life. In the Spring Comes, t...

Anny, thanks for taking my advice into consideration. Your essay inspired me a lot. Actually, when I first saw your title "border crossing activity", it didn't occur to me that you meant this activity, and I thought it's about the movies' content——the class mobility. I thought it was a pun...

Hi, Elizabeth, sorry to reply so late. I enjoy reading your revised essay and your reflection. I also learnt a lot from this activity. In terms of your essay, you mentioned many strategies of two movies. Your revised essay detailed the women issues, such as women's job matters and the differences of...

Dear Anny, thanks for sharing your opinion with me. I also understand your thoughts. And it’s normal that everyone has their own perspective when analyzing something. Thanks again for interacting with me.^_^

Hi Anny! Thanks for your comments! Your opinion about Wang Cailing's talent does make sense. Sometimes, there may be little discerning people to find talents. Maybe what I wrote in my essay was too arbitrary. I think Wang Cailing's problem was not that she wasn't gifted. I think she was not so talen...

Hi Elizabeth! Thanks for your comments! Yep, when I was writing this piece, I paid too much attention on the topic and ignored some details and strategies used in the two movies. And you really inspired me to add something about the situation depiction to correspond with my topic "make a choice...

Hi JIng, your title is very attractive! And so is your essay. You explained this sentence “To be or not to be” based on female leads’ different identities and pointed that we should respect the value of human’s existence. And you mentioned two women in the two films to discuss women’s price. I have ...

Elizabeth, I was impressed by your rational analysis. It seems that your article focuses on the eastern and western rhetoric and women’s empowerment behind the two different cultures. Your text structure is very clear and your explanations on your views are quite specific. And there is one thing tha...

Hi Anny! Thanks for sharing me with your unique ideas that I hardly thought of about the 2 movies. It seems that you focus on three topics: gender roles, success and the means to achieve it and non-verbal strategies, which instructs me a lot. It seems to me that you illustrated the unconventional as...

In both the Spring comes and Mona Lisa smile, there are girls who meet a dilemma choosing to pursue their dreams or to lead an ordinary life. In the Spring Comes, the heroine, Wang Cailing, has always dreamt to be a part of the National Grand Theatre, ending up adopting a girl with disability and ow...