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Hi Jiahui, Thanks for your thoughts! I try to be super aware when I cite other people’s work, even when I’m not required to. For example, I write a blog, and when I cite people there, I always give them credit (even if I don’t include a Works Cited page!). I want to treat other authors how I would l...

Hi Rong, Overall Impression: For your second post, while your attention to grammar and conventions decreased, your descriptive language and use of imagery soared. Interestingly, I am taking a Shakespeare class this semester and, literally just a couple hours ago, read from that sonnet for class. You...

Hi Rong, Overall Impressions: I genuinely enjoyed reading your essay. Your tone is conversational, which makes the essay feel less like a required informational assignment and more like a story that you are sharing with an acquaintance. There are almost no grammar oversights and you varied the sente...

Hi Rong, I genuinely enjoyed reading your essay. Your tone is conversational, which makes the essay feel less like a required informational assignment and more like a story that you are sharing with an acquaintance. There are almost no grammar oversights and you varied the sentence structure quite a...

Hi friends!

I have attached my paper for Dr. Zhang's class. Looking forward to reading everyone's papers and to hearing your thoughts!!

~Mariah